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The Shattered Reflection & The Dancing Shadows
Brief Synopsis Plot Points Notes

Brief:

A young girl who believes she is an angel witnesses a fight between angels and demons.

Synopsis:

Andrea Williamson, twenty-seven, grabs a set of angel's wings she's made for herself and flings them across the room, destroying them in frustration.  Realizing that her halo is gone, she reminisces about how she came to believe she was an Angel to a stuffed bear.

Twenty years ago: Andrea is scolded by her mother to get to bed, but after a restless night, she's tormented by a shadowy demon.  Two angels come to her rescue but after a second demon appears, the angel Hanna blasts them.  The blast weakens her, though, causing her to collapse.

After returning to consciousness the two angels are confronted by the seven year old who hopes to help them with a glass of water.  Hanna sends Diana, her other angel, back, leaving her alone with Andrea.  Tucking the child back in, Andrea calls for Lord Morningstar to test Andrea.

Plot Points:

  • The first mention of the human Michael occurs here, although we're not told who or what he is.
     
  • Andrea's mother calls her an angel, which, being a child, she believes.
     
  • The first appearance of the Shadows and Angels.
     
  • In a later episode, it's explained that the Angel's masks and veils help hide them from humans, yet Andrea can see them.
     
  • A shadow accuses Hanna of recruiting humans, not for the Angels, but for the Shadows.

Notes:

  • The characters and events of A Wish for Wings represent an allegorical retelling of the author's life.  Many of the events in story are events that really happened, but are twisted into a fantasy plot. 
     
  • Andrea represents the author's wish to be an artist.  Lise represents inspiration.  The Shadows represent (at this time) a group of people hoping to destroy the artistic drive (Morningstar representing the unnamed head of the group).  Hanna represents the author's muse.
     
  • Andrea's seven year old design is based on a young girl, now a young woman, named Hanna, living in Central Pennsylvania.  The twenty seven year old design is loosely based on King from SNK's King of Fighters.  Lise is based very roughly on Lisa Hayes of Robotech.  The Shadows designs were based on images the author saw as a small child, but would be redesigned later in the series.  Hanna was based on the "Seraph" angels seen in the original Battlestar Galactica.
     
  • Even the houses exist: Andrea's apartment was the author's from 2000-2001.  The interiors of her childhood house were based on the house she lived in from 1992 to 1996.
     
  • Panel 6 of "The Shattered Reflection, Part Two" was altered a few weeks after it went up.  Originally, Andrea had a halo in her reflection, which was removed after a plot change.
     
  • The Shattered Reflection was originally going to be an arc over the entire flashback story, with Andrea providing commentary as she went through her story.  The only time this happens is "The Shattered Reflection, Part Three."  Eventually, the titles were dropped from the "bookends" of the older Andrea.
     
  • The wings Andrea throws were originally going to be built throughout the series, finishing only days before she destroys them.  The series was revamped, bringing the wings back only once more, just days before they're destroyed.
     
  • A small detail that was never followed up on was that True Angels can appear anywhere they wish, but Human Angels must enter and exit through mirrors.
     
  • The faded text for both the angels and shadows are meant to emulate barely-heard voices.  Unfortunately, most people were unable to read the comic, and it is the most complained about aspect of the art.  The book version has legible speech in the word balloons.
     
  • "The Dancing Shadows, Part Four" was almost the end of the series.  A catastrophic hard drive crash destroyed the printing masters for these episodes, and left the author with just a 40 megabyte hard drive.  The episode was finished in an old DOS Program called DISPLAY, after installing Windows 3.11 on the drive.  For a time, the series was cancelled, although a "reboot" was considered with artist Jenni Bravo.  The series was halted for several months, and returned once a barely-suitable 800 megabyte drive was installed. 
     
  • Hanna destroys the Shadows with a white blast.  At this time, the "Colors of Magic" plot hadn't formed and The Shadows would have used black magic, the Angels white magic.  The colored eyes were originally just for emphasis.
     
  • Hanna removes her mask as Diana protests.  In a later episode, it's explained that the masks and veils help hide them from humans.  The two marks on her face were originally a way to mark Hanna as looking different from the older Andrea.  Eventually the "killmarks" would be explained in "The Lesson of Patience."
     
  • "The Dancing Shadows, Part Eight" introduces a new outfit design for Andrea.  Originally her outfit would have been a standard outfit for all the angels, but was differentiated so readers would be able to tell them apart.
     
  • "The Dancing Shadows, Part Ten" began a serious plot change from the original outline of the story.  Originally, Hanna was going to test Andrea to become an angel now by sending for the demon, Morningstar.  Instead, a new plotline developed adding more menace to Hanna, which would be developed later, and completely revamp the original outlines and creating the "Color War."
     
  • The "Next Episode" title cards were inspired by the "Next Episode" titles used in early Doctor Who episodes.